Can't compare to how brilliant page 2 must look like but damn a hats off to you Witchking00 for getting in on the Syx contest, she's quite a fun character to start off with.
Rather compliment on how you came up with this idea and just as well adding the genius of tentacles and wet shirts in the mix, damn all you need now is the sexy little nurse suit eh?
There's a ton of details packed into here, can really see you took alot of effort on generating this one with the see through effect of her shirts, the dripping of the water and even the ghoulish tentacle elemental taking form, nicely done. o0o
Just as amazed how well she came out looking in your style, the eyes really catch some attention but just as well kudos on taking such a natural curve with drawing her Witchking00, bravo!
hehehhe another outstanding picture indeed, sure I know more than well that one of scratchtastic main triumph on their contest it´s not the best picture of syx but know amazing and sexy styles that fits on her and invest on it for real! and I am more than happy that you will be choosing to receive this investiment!
a great posture for both panes(perfect to give a oustanding preview of it) as well a cute facial expression with great eyes and a beatyfull and long whyte hair(that I trully love it on her model).
the theme is hilarius indeed and sure syx is perfect for this kind of experiment. her outfit besides almost null is nice becasue you add both transparent and wet effect that add a more rich and evenn more perverted detail for your gallery and this nice OC. her body is freaking oustanding as expected, having some insange sexy hips(nice bikini) and not one but 2 of the most freaking amazing breast that you are done so far on DA, with a aamzing size and a delicious texture because both transparent and wet effect.
great light effects as well.
a great job my friend, hope to more you do much more job with scratchtastic , sure will be a nice investment fr you and for him.
even that I will not see the final , I really thanks for sharing this version.
This is a 2 page story. However, I still managed to set up for a beginning and end as well as: A: Why she is being soaked with water B: Syx has no real choice in what is happening C: That her Master is a bit of a prick D: And she has a touch of a sarcastic attitude F: It is supposed to be humorous
Personally, I think I did a DAMN fine job with what you referred to "laughingly bad dialogue" So again I ask please let me see what dialogue YOU would write in order to tell the same thing in 1 page.
And "Freezing cold" may be redundant but it is something that you hear people say all the time. ie Q: "Hey, whats the weather like outside?" A: "Dude, it is freezing cold out there today!